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Well the idea is good till 1:22
but then you'd brought your rest back into it like, BAM here's the rest :P
I shouldn't do it like that.
Anyways you said in your comments that it would be a slow trance song,
by my guess it has a 138 BPM wich is pretty fast :P
Nice bass - melo and kick.
4/5 - 8/10
-Tim