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Reviews for "Aspiration Rd. 2 {NewYear Mix}"

Very Good

It's good but the end it's bad....but the rest... awesome

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks =)

Needs serious improvement

Good remix but needs different synths and kicks and such. The whole song sounds like an intro that could be somthing good but it goes from intro back to song back to intro so i really could tell when the song started. The ending is also somthing like a very bad cliffhanger. The song just ends, just there, like that.

I assume you used FL to make this, if you want to retry this somtime hit me up at NG.Etox@live.com and ill help you out.

b0b3rt responds:

Yes, the ending is bad.
If I want help with mastering, I'll use google.

If I want help with the actual song, I'll ask Envy.

Uhm

Your kickdrum fills remind me of hip-hop snare fills, which isn't good.

This is so bad, I don't even know where to start.

I see that all you used were presets and a generic chord progression, explains all the listens though because people on NG seem to love that kind of stuff (at least the majority of the site).

You have some major balance and mixing problems.

Now that I think about it, I swear I've heard this melody from somewhere else, but then again, it's hard to make a new melody with that chord progression, there are only so many different variations that can sound 'ok'.

This track also lacks continuity, it keeps breaking the flow as well as adding too many different random variations. Stick with one idea and build from there, don't bring in random stuff.

"I uploaded this a couple weeks ago (before the new year), and realized the mastering was awful and that were a couple of other problems.. so I took it down and fixed it." You may want to work on it yet some more... Plus there's a difference between a finished track in terms of length/structure rather than mastering/mixing. This is nowhere near finished in terms of mixing. It was agonizing listening to this, especially the end part.

b0b3rt responds:

Yes, Kazmo, but don't tell me this was worse then the original? That's were you heard the melody, because you reviewed that too.

Nice idea, poor execution.

Bad Build-up/Arrangement, You need to work on your mixdown some sounds are weak or bad EQeud, too much highs on that main synth. Too much use of filtering, that's ruining the mix. Btw, it has an nice feeling the ideia is good but poorly executed.

b0b3rt responds:

Yes, I just learned how to do filtering and this was mainly an experiment in it. Thanks for the 3??

I like it!

Awsome song well done :)

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks.