Not bad..
I thought it was pretty funny actualy lol..
Good work, man
A. FURY
Reviews for "TIME LAPSE"
lol!!! This was funny
this animation had no plot line. I didnt even know what the time machine was till the second time he popped out of it.
Great show
Great show, but why was it rated T? I mean, its all clay...
wow muti coloured penguins ! ! !
penguins rock
Finally!
The first well-done self-produced claymation I've seen in ever!
I did have a few gripes, but I'll list what I liked about it first.
Very fluid. Loved how fluid most of the motions were. I've tried doing claymation before, it takes a hell of a lot of patience to get something like that done. I also loved the little effects you had, like him being sucked into the time machine doo-whicky and the way you made it look like gravity was working. Most claymations seem to have some real unrealistic scenes depicting fast actions like falls and slaps or whatever, but you're pretty frickin' good.
The sound was very irritating though. It didn't help that it went with bad lighting that made everything kinna fuzzy and bland.
It would be nice to see some backgrounds instead of just the wall behind the desk or whatever.
And yes I said you were very good wiht motion and fluidity, the projectile didn't look very lethal, and the way characters reacted to blows was very awkward.
A few logic points in this too - the first time the guy time travels, and he doesn't know what's happened, he suddenly figures out what it is and how to use it in a state of panic.
Hope to see something else by you eventually though!