Reviews for TLC - Episode 1

[TheBeagle]

Okay...needs lots of work but if improved....

To say the least, it was sligthly original.
Your characters were....shapes. Blah, the whole graphics scheme was WAAYY too simple. It looks like you have a design of making shapes so if you have your characters as shapes, give them shadows, inner shadows, 3d dementions, etc...just make 'em look better.

As for the style, it was kind of original. But some of the humor...well theres always a majority of jokes with baseball bats and couches. Try making a new series with something totally random.

Oh also, the frame rate was GREAT!!! I give you major props for the smooth running. What was the frame rate anyways?

Also great lip syncing for beats.

Um, needs a lot of work really but once improved can be great!

Keep it up!

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Uh, 120 fps...yeah. Sorry to say it goes down to 12 after like 5 or 6 episodes. I have to keep it down to make non-tweening animation... There are a lot more coming that a made a while back. The graphics will get a better (the characters stay basically the same, but backgrounds and items will be more detailed). Funny thing with that is, I made them all in MS Paint originally and animated them with Windows Movie Maker. This cartoon is based off one of those I made. Thanks for the lip syncing too. This took me a year to make because of that (120 fps...shiver...).

[FattyWhale]

Whatever...

This movie was quite...odd...to say the least. Your characters are seem to be completely random and don't have a lot of meaningful things to say. The graphics were odd, the looked very...odd. I liked the voice overs best, stick with them. Next time try to have a storyline that makes more sense.

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Thanks for watching! Yeah, they definitely get better. Tomorrow I will post 2 more of the same series, so be sure to check them out! Thanks again!

[DJ-Ultimize]

That was hilarious!

The comic releif of all the bad flash i've seen today! thank god you made these!

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Thanks you for reviewing this! There are more on the way!

[Der-Lowe]

Ok

This was funny... sort of.
You should improve the voices, polish the graphics, make it a bit longer and you'll have a very good flash.

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

There is definiitely better work coming. Thanks for the review!

[Lonley-lover]

it was humorus

i think you sould work a bit on the sound quality, and perhaps maked the graphics a tad more detailed. not changing the characters. just like smoother tweening and stuff that will develop over the time you use the program. it looks like you are getting good reveiws so cudos!

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Gracias, Senior. There's more on the way (in better quality)