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Reviews for "CSAMW: A Word on Bullying"

that was great!

i think you're inspired by capt capitalism.
but that's alrigh, this rocks and is really funny.
improvements:
- better graphics: you learn by doing
that's all really, the better graphics aren't necessary cuz these are good enough to be a hit!

what i suggest:
- make a series out of this.
- do NOT change the name and how he says it.
- do NOT change the random looks of the capatain super america man of wonder (or whats his name) that could be a trademark.

that's it!
conclusion:
better graphics, except, don't change a thing.
and you can really make a good series.

THE-BOLSHEVIK responds:

Haha, I probably was subconciously inspired by Capt. Capitalism! Thank for your comprehensive review!

My official angle is that "The graphics are *supposed* to be bad," but that's just a cop-out for the fact that I'm just a newb. However, as you said, you learn by doing, so I expect things to clean up as time goes on.

As to your suggestions:
-I'm pretty sure I will do that at this point. The reviews have been good enough that I feel vindicated, so the Captain shall go on!
-Lol, I would never dream of changing the name. I have a love for unnecesarily bulky names and "super voices."
-Yeah, if that could be the Captain's trademark, that'd be cool! Then other people could steal from *me*! Huzzah!

Thanks again for your excellent review and kind words; it makes it all worthwhile!

lol...nice

the graphics werent too appealing, but damn man that was funny keep it up and you could have a great series

THE-BOLSHEVIK responds:

Thanks for your review!

I made the graphics lackluster so as to give this a feeling of low production values (which is a way of coping with my crappy drawing style =P).

Based on what I've been hearing, I think I am going to be continuing this as time goes on, so I can improve the graphics to actual decent quality! Huzzah!

Thanks again for your kind words!

Nice!

Wow... that was a great first flash. CSAMW's random character changes were hilarious. Hope you keep working on the series!

I did have some sync issues with the sound not matching up with the lips. Not sure if that's my computer crapping out or if it's actually a problem with the flash, though. Either way, hope to see more of your work soon.

THE-BOLSHEVIK responds:

Thank you sooo much for your review! Based on what I've been hearing, I think I am going to keep the series going. Huzzah!

I'll admit that the lip synching problems came from my end. There's just a tiny bit of lag when I'm making the movie, and I couldn't seem to work it out just right. As I get more experience, though, I'll work on better mouths and synching.

Thanks again for your kind words!

you got a 25/100 of this making it

im just telling you what i think some people dont want to here about bulling

THE-BOLSHEVIK responds:

That's probably true, but my main point wasn't exactly making a real stance on bullying (particularly since the Captain is a bit of a bully himself). It's just a simple introduction that *happens* to have bullies in it. However, I thank you very much for your review!

Nice job!

Its good to see someone put some effort into a first work and have it come out well! The random stuff in there is very humorous especially the guys head being blown off. Keep the series going.

THE-BOLSHEVIK responds:

Thank you very much! I agree that all a first flash needs is some effort put into it for it to be decent. Based on the way the reviews are going, I think I will keep the series going! (By the way, that's my favorite part as well. =P) Thanks again!