I really dig it.
I like this a lot, my only gripe is that it's a bit short. I know you said you didn't know where to go with it (and believe me, I have a million of those too) but you have a lot going on in this song, you could double up some verses or throw a break or bridge in towards the end - just some quick-spur suggestions.
Not that anything is bad how this is - I don't think the sound is cluttered or anything. Just the song is over too soon for my tastes.