Weel...
Im actually a claymator myself i got 1 in the clay page :)
anyway it was decent...
the 1st part was a complete ripoff of knox
ur animation was decently smooth its just the story was LONG and it was kinda uninteresting it was funny at times like the part w/ the hat but i definently respect the fact that u put a lot of effort into it and 4 a 1st it was very good...
im hoping 2 c more frome U
:)