Very good
The melody is great but lacks variety a bit. You don't have too change it, you can simply let the other instruments play it because the addition of the choir & strings isn't enough. You can also experiment with hum how to call it? 'Powah of teh song'. I mean one part can be played gently let say on piano and the other with powerful orchestral hits and brass sounds etc. You know what I mean. Nevertheless it has a lot of potential and your other songs are great that's why I'm giving you 5/5 & 10/10