Pretty nice try.
I played part 1 and 2 before i reviewed this one (excluding gold). I think that the second one was better, this isn't much of a improvement. Better graphics, ok sound. I also think it's too short, i mean the others were long, and they're fantastic. Also the screen was a issue, could you make it a little smaller next time? it's harder if you can't see the whole screen. Next time, try too:
-Make the screen smaller(just to where it all fits without a scroll bar)
-Make it longer
-Keep the graphics the same, or better
-Possibly better music, you'r voice overs are good as is
I just think this would help. Remember good things come in time, so take your time, make it perfect. Sorry for making such a lon review, and good job making the game :D.