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Reviews for "The Apartment Issue 1"

Not bad.

Yes, the animation is bad, and there's a lack of background sounds, but this totally has potential. The script is veriably good--to a point where it hardly suffers from the animation or lack of sounds/sound quality. I suggest either improving your animation skills or getting a better animator. Kudos, man.

:D

that was ok. not incredibally funny, you maybyt could have spent more time writing it (why was mark even there)

That wasn't bad!

It's even pretty good since it's your first flash movie here (I don't know if you tried to submit some before that were blammed but I think this will pass).
Lipsync was horribly wrong and the animation was kinda basic but it really shows you've got potential and you can actually draw better stuff than stickmen so it's a really good point for you. Character's design were original too.
I hope to see more stuff from you, I'm sure you'll improve! :)

Learn to draw a little better

Te apartmet building wasnt drwan right. Google some lessons. Other than that, It passes by me