Nothing wrong with this at all!!
Michael, after listening to your song about 11 times (lol) i made an account with newgrounds just to let you know your music is a quantum leap above any music ive heard on the audio portal. I would much rather hear this music on the radio than most of the stuff they play now. If i had the capital i would be investing in you, there is something special that makes you able to write such music. Now im not saying its flawless but, i think this song creates a mood that not much other music creates. 10 for music of a genius!