::Out Of Mind::
beautiful song Gorc. Is it acoustic or classical guit? The lead sounds classical/
let me know when you add violin, if you do.
5/5
Reviews for "::Out Of Mind::"
gOrc responds:
yeah the pull off/hammer on thingy gave it a little classical touch, but I won't say that the piece is classical. It's an acoustic guitar (you can see the beauty on my user icon). I think I will need more practise for the violin first, but I will definatly use it for my future projects. Thanks for renting it your ears :)
gOrc
Wow!
That was very, very nice!
Excellent job, I loved the flow of the song and the ambiance made it really soothing.
Stunning. :]
10/10 5/5
gOrc responds:
it makes me very happy to hear that! thanks man.
Out Of Mind
Probably the last piece for Newgrounds, therefore, a poem.
Out Of Mind
I'm sitting here, lonely, in my room.
The lights are off and it's a dark, dark afternoon.
Rain is falling outside, it's the only sound i hear.
It's calm around me, but chaos in my head. I try to make my mind clear.
But i'm not succeeding, it keeps getting worse.
When will it stop, this nightmare, this curse?
I take a look outside, the streets are dark and wet.
I walk from the window and i lay down on my bed.
''This is it'' i softly say to myself.
If there's a common enemy, then it's life itself.
It's a fight that keeps going on, and on, and on.
It's a fight that only stops, only stops when you are gone.
But i won't give up now, i came so far.
No, i won't give up and i will win this war.
I stand up and walk outside.
The rain falls down on me, but in me, i feel pride.
There's nothing that can stop me now, nothing to hold me back.
Slowly the sky turns from grey to black.
''Come and get me'' i shout towards the sky.
Farewell my friend, this is my goodbye.
Excellent piece of music and good luck in the future!
10/10
5/5
MH16
gOrc responds:
Wow...that you've honoured my song with a poem is just the greatest compliment I could ever achieve! A big thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings, I hope you never stop to express yourself through art. Thank you!
What more can I say...
Its so warm.
I heard stories of you, and remember you as well. Now I come to your userpage to bring in the memories of how I use to listen to some of your music, and I come across this. This is simply amazing. I could write imagery to it, and I am hehe, but you probably wont see it. Perhaps its for good, solid, poetic justice that you do not see my review, because this song itself washes a feeling of loneliness and goodbye forever over me.
A boy sitting in his room, sits up to stare at a picture of a landscape painting his grandmother gave to him for his 7th birthday. He admires its colors, its wonderful depth of green and violet. Outside, a mountain rests, calling to the child. He grabs a cap from his bedside table, and heads out his door.
The ground is soft. The yellow and orange leaves scattered amongst it provide a nice feeling of warmth for the boy. He smiles as he trots along its path under the daytime sun. He takes one look at his house, then continues down the path and into the wonderful unknown.
Up the hill, tiny branches cover the sky, but there is just enough to let the light pour downwards and onto the boys face. He climbs over rocks and bumps in the trail until he reaches an overlook. The red and orange hue reflects in the boys eyes as he stares into the clearing. He walks out of the tree filled path, and emerges into pure Fall.
The trees are all turning. What was once a green forest is now a mixture of openness and everlasting beauty, secluded forever in the forest. The little boy gazes over the hills, and sits down to sleep a peaceful sleep.
Well gork, you might be this child. You may come back to your home, where you started spreading your musical talents over us, or you may continue adventuring out in the forest you are in today. I hope we can see you again sometime, and maybe you'll even respond to this review.
Absolutely Beautiful Music.
gOrc responds:
Hey there!
From time to time I am checking newgrounds for new flash movies of my favourite artists. And sometimes, when there are new reviews to my older songs, especially reviews of the kind you've posted, I start to look back to the newgrounds-times. ^^
I left this place because, unlike you, many of the people here misunderstood the worth of music. I don't know if I'll post any new material here someday, I think it is enough for me, when I am able to read such beautiful und thoughtful responds from the people that are sharing the same colourful imaginery with me.
Have a nice day,
gOrc
my gosh
Do you submit stuff somewhere else on the interwebs? I really really want to hear more from you.
gOrc responds:
I was trying to build something up at MySpace, SoundCloud and a german musician community. The problem is that I didn't got enough time to maintaining them and all of this starts came to an early end. If I'm able to establish anywhere else on the web, I will post that in the news.