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Reviews for "Falling to pieces/What's Done"

Shit, I know you're gonna think I'm only copying

Metaljonus' comment, Baddest-Man-Ever---------->
Because he's ANOTHER one of the coolest muthphuckas I've heard here,
B-U-T, I mean it, when I say, why the fuck don't you just use both of em?
(I thought that before I even read his review, Man.
Oh and Metaljonus, "Get OUT of my head!!" Heh heh heh)
I mean, you don't strike me as the type, who's afraid to break the Thrash mold.
C'mon, the metal that you bleed deserves to be released however does it more justice. NOT specifically on the opinions of us mere Newgrounders.
Ha! Kidding, pee pole, I'm kidding. *resists the urge to tell you, "You probably SHIT hardercore things than I can play on the axe."*
Nah, but seriously, Man, why CAN'T you use both? They're BOTH rad in their own way, you know? Hell, I've NEVER heard of a switching chorus that bombed a song (at least not as bad @ss as yours, Man).
*wipes the warm shit from my nose* Hehe
Ah, I can't wait til this shit comes out. Let me know when it does, ah-ite?
You KNOW I'd be willing to help you get rid of a few of those albums, Dude.
Fo Reelz, Nick'uh. PLEASE don't forget to update me on your progress or I'll be forced to step foot OUT of your closet and attempt reminding you about your "fans" and your dedication to them, eh? Oh yeah, and, we need more toilet paper, Ok? I used the last of it, while I was watching you sleep. *watches you turn and glance behind your back, JUST in case I AM there*
Whatever. The song is fuckin' sweet. Get that album done so I can buy one.
Until the next time you spoo, your hardcore in my ear. . .

.................Take care, be good and Trick or Treat.period
<3:(Gaia:)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

I appreciate all your words. ;)
Thanks as always, for the support. You KNOW you will be the first to know. :D
\m/

Sweet.

I would use both choruses man but that's just me. Maybe add some more harmonies on the vox for the chorus 2 part. Killer song btw

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Haha, I guess there is no rule against two different chorus melodies. haha. Thanks Dudeface.\m/

Also, checka da emails...I think I stalked you. haha

A full Album !!!

as for the help

the sync between the guitar and the drums are realy good, and you made a well played solo

as for the vocals: the clear vocals of the chorus are excelent, very well placed in the song
as for the grunting vocals, it felt like your voice was fading a bit when you did them in the song, or maybe they instrumentals had a much bigger volume than them, but that a tune you have to work a little on,.
as the main singing like from 00:19 to 00:44 were fine, but somehow it sounded like you were holding you voince too much, I mean like trying to make it sound something between grunting and clear, I favor to clear vocals a little more on this but the shouting still rules(BTW Tom Araya) I mean with a little more natural voice

as always another great work, well what songs are the other 3?

I'm pro for the Brazilian girl with the guitar thing, and tell Kupia there is some good metal bands in Brazil like Angra, Shaman (both progressive metal) as you said Sepultura, Sarcófago (Sarcophagus), and we have Max Cavalera, it is not only Carnival and soccer here, we still have some kick ass bands...and fans

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

This was a rough mix, dude. I just rushed through the vocals to give the ideas for the choruses, so I could tell which one to use. But thank you for your feedback!

sweetness

If the whole album is like this, oh man. The whole song sounds good man. Guitar tone is awesome. Cymbals are kind of loud, but might just be my speakers.

Anyway, the chorus. I agree that the chorus at :57 has good melody. I think it does sound kind of thin though, like there is not enough going on. Maybe try a melody with your voice, like multiple tracks. Something like that. Sorry I didn't have much else to help with, this is a good song.

\m/

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks dude, glad you dig it!.

An Album! Haha can't wait!

This is pretty awesome. The riffs are pretty awesome. The first part of the solo, kinda reminds of the solo from blackmail the universe by megadeth, i dunno if you've ever heard it but the solo is very very very super amazingly similar :P.

Anyways, i prefer the first melody for the chorus, the one at 0:57, even though the second is pretty awesome :). I'm not a big fan of the scream vocals in the background of the clean vocals in the chorus, it kinda distracts you from your awesomeness that are you vocals :D.

The Drums could also do with some work, i suppose this is a rough copy but the drums are good, but need quite a bit of tweaking, especially on the fills.

I hope in final version there's alot of bass :P, don't know why, it always feels like there's something missing when the bass is either really quiet and/or it isn't very bassy. The lyrics are pretty awesome though ;)

Do have any idea when this album's gonna be finished? Cos from the sounds of this, sounds like it's gonna be epic! Also, will it for download, on CD or what? ;) Can't wait man, looking epic. Good luck with it ;)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

No idea when the album is going to be finished. Thanks for the feedback on the choruses. As for the drums, I quite like them as is. Its all personal preference in the end. Maybe before final recordings I'll find a real drummer. :)

Thanks again dude.