Not bad, not bad
Well, first off, let me congratulate you on how you made the top of the week and everything. Congratulations and you must be so proud. Now it is review time
First off, your melody is very creative, you definitely have some really good ideas. You added that old feel to it and you really made it work out for you. The melody continued flowing with very little repatition and you kept it moving. Now for the problems.
While, yes, I decided to go the extra mile and a half and play the game, I understand why it was so short. The only problem was, that it was really short. If you make a song work on the length and make sure to keep it continuesly interesting. What you had was pretty good though. Next, you need to work on your ending, it usually kills it for me if you just end it with out any resolution to your song.
Anyway aside from that you did a good job, hope to hear more from you. Peace,