hmm
I think that it was a great idea and thought for a flash and the graphics were pretty great, and i agree with the message..
Ideas for improvement:
1. Could have lengthened it, another scene perhaps
2. The music didnt really go with your message at all.. the title music seemed to be off and the sean paul song is talking about finding girls in the club. i think it would have added alot to your flash if the music was sort of a little softer and reflected your character, just didnt seem like it did.
But overall, you still got a 4 from me :)