eh, it was k
i have to say that your voice acting needs some work. and no im not trying to be a hater, im just sayin.
you could start by backing away from the mike so that it doesnt pickup your breath and doesnt make the super pronounced "p"'s and other such letters.
it really hurts the quality.
also, try varring your tone. the actors sounded almost monotone, as if they didnt care. you need to add the apropriate style of enthusiasm to the situation.
i recommend going to youtube and checking out Digital Ph33r's guide to making a machinima. this is where im basing alot of this. though about half of it you could probably ignore. just watch the tidbits that are relevant and there you go.
i like the series, keep it up!