great fash
this is a really good flash, but you really should consault an audio visual technician like me about your sound, you can find one at any confrence center or school auditorium, or concert hall, or resort.
Reviews for "Shoukei : Immortality"
Dialogue
Next time maybe you can not use dialogue. It didn't really add much to the overall effect of the flash.
none
It was good. Really good. The thing here is that you don't have sound to match the quality of the rest of the peice. The music was fine, but voice acting was bad. You had a lot of "pops" in there. One way to fix it is to put something between your mouth and the mic, so that the wind exhaled when talking doesn't shoot into the microphone. I think if you fix that little bit of voice over you have an almost perfect movie.
good one
very nice animation. i liked the graphics in this one and the whole plot to it too, very interesting.
is this animation part of a series or going to be part of a series? if its not part of a series..... it definitely has the potential to be a good series.
Dude!!!
That was awesome, except for the sound. See if you can find some voice actors online, this is worthy of their attention. And much as I love FF the music just doesn't work. I'd love you to sort out the sound and update this coz then I'd expect it on front page. I wouldn't normally care but It's just that the animation is so good it just seems a shame not to bring the sound up to the same level