all is good but two things-
sound. i could barely understand what they were saying half the time. and also, it took a while to change from scene to scene. speed that up a bit. it gets boreing when nothing is happening, just do that and it'll be better.
it is boring being around hobos... they tend to talk nonsense and babble. I was trying to project what I have experienced. The slow scene movement and camera panning was to express a slowed view of reality. Not to mention this has very deep subconcious meanings. Look at it from this perspective... "funk" the lead role meets a dead robot, and explains that death is swift. Then meets an unintelligable madman... ie insanity... but then meets the average... and they see him as insane. Not well projected... but this is my first flash movie.... Im definately frustrated because it did not come out how I saw it in my mind.
Great graphics!
The graphics were well detailed and interesting. As you said, there are some sync problems, and I'm not sure what the robots are saying, "I learned to die myself?" but the graphics themselves are meaningful and convey a sense of depression. Overall, amazing work for 14 hours.
tks...sync problems werent bad as expected, but was the most frustrating part, just another hurdle to overcome... the artwork itself took about 8 hours, and the animation took about 6 or so hours... in my opinion it took long because im still struggling with the software... thanks for the review.