Good but soo short
Don't worry, I am also surprised this passed judgement. Why couldn't you make it longer? The bit I saw was good. It only wenr for like 7 seconds. You have skill, you need ot use it.
Reviews for "Daily Short"
Frostbreath responds:
I only had a day before my ban was lifted. And then i would loose motivation, since i'd be posting on the BBS mostly.
Thanks for commenting my skills and thanks for reviewing!
This was alright
Maybe this flash was very very short, but the graphics weren't bad. I mean, the drawing of the bunny looked good (too bad it got killed, LOL). But looking at the date, it was for Daily Day. Ah yes, that was a good day for the portal. :D Anyway, not bad work there Frost.
Frostbreath responds:
Though it was the bunny that was easiest to make. And i realised that if i submit it on this wonderful day, then the chances of survival is much larger. But then again, if that was the only reason that it got protected, then i'm far from satisfied.
Thank you for reviewing :)
For a first try..
It's very good. But this is also one of those flashes where the author looses patience and submits it half done, am i right? I liked the bunny-getting-spiked effect, and the face was well drawn, though when you chose to spike him as well, it sorta ruined it. Way too short.
Frostbreath responds:
That was a very helpful review, thank you :)
I know about these flaws as well, but rather than fixing them, i'l just make another, bigger project. And yes, i lost patience.
ok,not great
but how how you got it past judgment is because its dailyday and you had daily at the beginging of your title so it has to pass judgement or else. well i guess it is kind of strange how this passed,unless mass voting
Frostbreath responds:
You're absolutely right, though you could've included how i can improve my work in your review, but thanks anyway.
Needs to be longer
The animation was actually quite good (appart from the text... i really don't like that style of drawing something, then redrawing it in a new frame, then looping it. It's not as bad when there are like, 3 frames at least, but 2 is just crap).
It also should be longer. That would make a good intro for a movie, but it's not good enough to be on NG in its own right because nothing actually happens.
Frostbreath responds:
I agree, though i quickly lost patience in making this short, so i submit it like this. Too bad you didn't like the text, i will try to improve that 'til next time.
Thank you for you very helpful review.