One Change I recomend
Adding Peter's Laugh. You know, "Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh, and then ano-ther heh-heh-heh-heh-heh!" That'd probably help.
I'm so Glad I clocked this link!
ILUU, and this.
I loved the beginning, how it was just d'oh. And the nintendo part. c:
I have to say, you saved my day :D
-All the best !