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It's a good job for a first one, really.
Need some introduction for your story and... a conclusion ! (dead maybe a end haha). The music was good except the thing that it don't stop at the end.
Great work, continue.
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It's a good job for a first one, really.
Need some introduction for your story and... a conclusion ! (dead maybe a end haha). The music was good except the thing that it don't stop at the end.
Great work, continue.
HUA!!
This should be longer.
Myself being in the army, I can say that you had a few things off. Using a truck just before you get to the target is a HUGE mistake for a sniper. It's easier for the enemy to see. Next time have him in a gilly suit, or something. Not a HumVee.
Anywyas... The music was good. (Even though you used a band that is agianst the military.) The graphics were okay. It could be better, but if this really is your first flash, I tip my beret to you. Good work.
pretty good start on something
the road is too clean? wtf kind of comment was that? It was a good start and the ending cracked me up.
Clean Street
Why is the street so clean, and sandy stuff coming up?
Try and make the "street" dirtier, + this Flash not bad :)
Not bad
Hey for your flash thats not half bad. Great music and sound. You had some nice detail on the hummer too. Keep it up