Cool.
I like your commentary, and your story. Both were classic, and both were done with the flair of a soon to be master story-teller. Yet there comes a time in one's art career when one must switch mediums, and no longer use crayola crayons. Your flash would have been better if you hadn't used clocks, or, if you want to stick with clocks, make the social commentary a little closer to home, such as having a "US" clock, or a "minority" clock. More blatant ties into the real world would've added not only satirical punch, but another level of humor.
Great job man, but don't limit yourself, branch off. Or, if you don't feel like branching off, just be a little more ham-handed with your commentary and story.