You seem to be quite the talented animator. The drawings were great. The nice thing about this animation is that you were able to create a quite dynamic anime movie which can be quite hard since it requires a lot of skilled drawing. So there's no problem with the animation and drawing skills, the music was very fitting aswel, but I think you should improve the story concept a little, it's too chaotic, there are like 5 things happening at the same time with a lot of switching between the scenes. It's hard to create a bond with characters that way it's all just a little quick. And offcourse you should look for voice actors, it would make the movie a lot more awesome then it allready is.