((( CUTE )))
This was cute, the voice helped with that, the idea of it in B/W was ok but could be worked on, the whole stick style was ok aswell but needs more detail like character like characters and some sorta backrounds, the voicing and story seemed to be the best part and playedout well...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs abit of more detail and effort in the character areas, And while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W
A good idea, but needs more effort and ideas, and color...