much better than 1
the voices were imporved in parts, but still a better effort over all, your art seems consistant, and very detialed, i wish the wizard in the woods would have defended himself, instead of freaking out and dieing, but oh well
now that i have seen them all, I would like to offer some ideas for chapter 4: for one: why not explain why they were exlided from lockliar in the first place, there must be a larger hatred going they can't just want to destroy the place if they were exiled, where did the character learn the magic that he uses so often, inshort offer us a backstory, maybe make it a seperate movie, just some ideas