Just one thing....
This flash was amazing...the graphics were top noch and the music was well played. The presentation was also well displayed, The plot also seems original and pretty interesting. There is ,however, one downfall towards this flash. I think you were trying to set some kind of mood by slowly everything down, but having the camera move along with the character isn't the best choice. The problem is that the loop of the character kinda makes you want it to just go faster. I found it annoying to wait like 2 min for the main character to just walk inside of the bar. There are too many slow moving effects ,but other than that everything else is great.