very nice
i think it would b so much better if u got some voice acting
it got tiring having to read everything after a while
Reviews for "Love, Bullets, Nicotine"
Nice! Bloody, but nice!
My only complaint was that there wasn't really any animation (but that wasn't really a problem) and it felt too like my idea for my movie, at least at first. :)
Damn cool story.
Great!
I loved it. It fit together so perfectly. I only have two complaints: One, to fix the colors of the text so you can read it against the black and white backgrounds, and two, to make the second one as quick as possible.
Beautiful; good change from the rest of the portal
"twas well written and it was a good choice of music. It'd be really really nice to see more stuff like this in the future.
nonironic noir flash...irish soul...beauty
Indeed. No irony here. Love of the genre. And for that,
I give respect. Excellent job. Really. Continue to not
show the protagonist, until, until ...well only if you
need to show him for some denouement or climax.
On the controlled (barely) fall from the flat to the
roof of the cab down the drainpipe...try this: he
grabs the cord to the drapes and in one continuous
motion, cuts the cord with a kitchen knife, drops the]
knife doubles the cord and whips it around the drain pipe
and hangs on with both hands gripping for dear life...
(you see, I think we need to save the skin on his
hands in case he needs to use them later, say, to
fire either the revolver or the Browning...by the
by, nice choice the Browning. The original belgian
9mm Browning single action semiauotmatic pistol
was the sidearm of choice among veteran SAS dudes
until quite recently.)