So I was linked to this again the other day...
Fun Fact; This was made after I flamed you for tracing artwork and then posting it without mentioning that it was traced, but mentioning thise would of course ruin everything.
The pacing ruins this so much, it's not even funny. It seems like you spent more time throwing in porn (Which is ripped from some random site Zephyr posted, not me) and making grunting sounds than actually thinking about what you were doing, making for an overly drawn-out borefest with sub-par visuals. If it had moved faster and gotten to the point sooner, it might've been a more effective counter-attack, but even then it still wouldn't excuse what you did to instigate the whole event that lead up to it.
P.S: it's not your forum
P.P.S: naruto still blows ass