Fair.
The lyrics are superb.
The rhythm is great.
The only thing that this song needs is a well-balanced chorus.
I uploaded it onto youtube, ( I Guarantee Credit)
Reviews for "Big Red - Mr Jones"
BigRed responds:
Meh, I'm growing really tired of trying to make everything I write have three verses and a chorus. I think I want to experiment with song structure, change it up a little bit. This song is all about the story, I wrote a few hooks but really didn't feel them and cut them out.
OMG
HOLY $#IT THIS IS ONE OF THE GREATEST SONGS I HAVE EVER HERD AND THIS IS COMING FROM A WHITE PERSON!!!!!!!! 100/10!
BigRed responds:
I love white people!
So sad lol.
Ture true thats how you can become a bum not doin much but suckin on yer own thumb. < Ha funny. Great rap man!
BigRed responds:
Man, I love sucking thumbs. :D
Ok.............
I like it, but i think every time theirs a guy who repeats the words gets annoying, but nice.
BigRed responds:
Yeah, I didn't totally succeed with the hype vocals. But, I'm trying! thanks
Damn...
You got me there mate.. Not many speak truth about life, life and $hit people go through. Stories of others, facts of life, disasters, and family life. Not bling, cars, or pointless $hit. Personally i hate biggots who mistreat thier freinds, pimps who leech off inocent wemon who try to make a life, not being hustled into a whore house. Rap is to tell the stories of others and putting thier life into beats, not to show off and say how much you got and hating on other-lesser people (like who wants to be at least stable in thier money situation).
Good job, again-
this is good material.
I know a producer if you'd like hit me up and i can show him your material :)
Take it easy,
Alexander
BigRed responds:
Muchas gracias for the kind words! I'm always down to check out producers, if he wants to send me some stuff I'll give it a listen! Thanks!