Good but..
Your voice is too white xD Great lyrics but modifying your voice would help.
Reviews for "Wyze - Tears of a Child"
Blasphem-E responds:
Haha, I'm still finding my voice. I think it was better in "stop me" personally but meh. Thanks for the review man
Wow... damn...
My god bro. Me and my girl just listened to this and we're both absolutely stunned. You've done an amazing job with this one sir. The flow only comes off for a second during the first half of your second chorus, but you brought it back so I'm not going to dock you for that. You maintained your volume well, and had great emotion in this. I'm not sure what mic you're using, but that's really my only big issue with this track.
Excellent work sir.
5/5 10/10 fav'd
Blasphem-E responds:
Same mic as the last little bit. The SM58. As for the flow in the chorus, funny story. My aim has a funny habit of telling me to update at inopportune times, so that caused the computer to skip a bit. So my flow was on point, but the playback had stopped for a split second and the recording continued on the same timeline. When I heard it though, I thought it was cool, so I just left it.
Thanks man, glad to hear this got the response I was hoping for
fuck man,yes
damn man,calling this track just decent is like smashing your head against a wall
Blasphem-E responds:
Thanks dude, glad you liked
You're a fuckin asshole!
Why'd have to go and make me all depressed, that aint cool man!
But in all seriousness, this track is deep. My favourite flow moment was at the "But the sedatives force him to lie still and emulate-The dead" part, you mastered this beat. The last line: "Doctor hears no pulse so he arrives in haste Sees the kid on the floor, smile on his face"-> damn... thats almost as sad as that scene in King Kong when the big ape gets face fucked with chlorophyll...a single tear came out.
The mixing on this track is also exceptional. There are a few spots where it could have been touched up. For example: you can hear some parts when the mic was moved while recording.
Overall great track: I never expected this track to be so powerful when I read the verses on Facebook, props bro. Keep at it! How about make some positive happy tracks? Possibly about leprechauns and/or jackalopes.
Blasphem-E responds:
leprechauns and jackalopes having sex with each other
very G
i just wish you would've posted the lyrics up =/
did you do any ad libs?
-UNIQUE LINX-
Blasphem-E responds:
No adlibs. Lyrics coming.