This isnt a game
Only put something in the game section if its a game. thats not the reason for the low score tho. the reasons are:
voiceovers are pretty badd, work on it, or have some frends that can do a good mario impression do the voices, because ur mario and luigi sounded the same.
art was good, but the heads could be more round, rather than that flat back thing u hav going on
and if your going to say theres choices in ur comment, make sure there in the movie.