Nice try, but just boring
Like the guy before me said, it was no game. It was simply a movie with videogame characters. Not that it really matters, but it would be better if you change it. About the movie:
Graphics: The graphics were kinda weird. I think Mario's drawing was alright (I like real drawings more then sprites) and the rest of the drawings were also not bad (I mean the drawings of people, the fire at the beginning and the pipe part at the end looked pretty bad), but the animation wasn't that good. I suggest you work a bit on that. It's always good to work on the graphics by the way, could improve the score a lot.
Sounds/Music: At the beginning I thought it had no sounds at all. You could've at least added some music there and some sounds for the fire and all that. Also, the voice-acting was pretty bad, really. If that's you, then I doubt that your 15 years old (sounds more like 13 to me). Anyway, I suggest you add some more music and sounds to this, cause the silence is kinda boring.
Violence: The violence wasn't that good. Not that there was supposed to be a lot of violence in this, but the part were Luigi was on fire looked pretty bad. It would've been fine with me if you only make his face and his clothes black.
Overall 3 out of 10, 1 out of 5. The movie is just a bit boring, not much stuff happens and too much silence. The movie was also too long. For example: You could make the part were Mario thinks (and the camera zooms in) a bit shorter. You should remove the 'silent part' and the part were Mario starts partying because he's tired doesn't make sense. And then at the end you see: "to be continued", well sorry, but I ain't very interested in part 2. This is gonna need a lot of work before it will get a decent score. Anyway I still wish you good luck with making part 2 and I hope it'll be a lot better then this one.