You almost have a good flash cartoon
You really need to get rid of the subtitles man, honestly. You spent probably more time writing the subtitles than working on your movie. Next time, try adding more to the story and try to speed it up a bit. The newsman took almost half the cartoon because of his very slow talking. Get to the point. Take off the subtitles, we know what "wierd classical music" sounds like, and don't need you to point it out for us. Thanks, and your style and art are brilliant, just get the plot moving a little quicker and add more to your graphic style, and the acting and humor will fit right in.