I'm a huge Broken Saints fan, indifferent to Clocks, and I hadn't even heard of Locks until I watched this. In any case, this was abso-fuckin-lutely hillarious. It reminded me a lot of a Knox flash, which is definitely a good thing. You also did an impeccable job spoofing BS, it was plain as day which chapters were meant to be which. You obvoiusly did your homework.
As a side note, this probably won't be all that funny unless you've watched at least a few Broken Saints episodes. So go do that, bookmark this, and come back and watch it after. You'll get more of the humor.