Well
I can definitely see the similarities to the Matrix, also the dialog was muffled, the movie was slow paced, and it ended to soon. Nothing was explained, therefore the movie had no plot. Camera angles were nice, but the shoddy black and white graphics made it painful to watch. Keep practicing, you had a good start!
ok, first off, the point was I got comments it was like the matrix so I CHANGED it so it wasn't, (i was refering to my original preview) second, this is a P-R-E-V-E-I-W, to show whats comming, of course it's short, duh, thank you for the compliment on the camera angle though, and by the way, I wanted it not color, I have been on flash for 2 years, my good start was then, thank you for you comments though, Have a Hectic Day! :P
Great
=I like your style of animation. Great movie