Impressive, and yet, timeless
This is truly, as countless others have said, a great song.
Despite how the Ending and the Beginning don't quite match up for a Loop, this song, once you've heard it, will offortlessly play dozens of times before your mind can register it.
Normally, I favor more breakneck paced songs, with sharp tunes, but the way you planned this one out, and the Sound effects you placed on the Voices was phenomanally done.
Normally I despise Lyrics, save for a handful of words, in Songs, however, once I had memorised the Lyrics, I could hear the Spoken words not as a language, but as the sound they were, and words ceased to exist in your song, instead, becomming lengthy, sorrowful tones that conveyed your emotion at the time. Truly a moving piece. I hope to hear more with equally phenomenal works, and any Future vocals, i can't wait to see, no, hear, how you work them. Bravo my friend, Bravo
Mayhaps, a future work of yours will be Inspired by your Penname's namesake? (Merlin) Would be interesting to here the Tales of merlin translated into Techno Music, rather than movie or play or Video.... Mayhaps your the one to do it.....