Well done for a first submission
This is very good for a first submission. A good plot line, graphics are good and esspecially the voice acting is very well done. The only downside being you uploaded it to the wrong resolution
size, Go to your gold grounds menu now to sort it.
Other than that I think that you have done really well for a first submission and will go far with your work and I hope to see much more from you.
~~Peace Out
OutlawStarStud