Very interesting
This song for me is perfect, listening this i imagined a game with song(a good game, sure =]) and i don't know why, but it remember me final fantasy. Maybe you can do better, but i think that it's not necessary =]
The part when the flute comes in really is fine :p
Good work.
Very RPG
Very good quality, good transisions, great Classical work...
full scores
hit me back yo :)
Very mysterious.
As you're already aware of it I won't spend an age griping about it, but I agree with you about the harp sound.
The tempo is fine, it probably is that you've heard this a lot of times.
The section that has just the bass and harp does begin to feel too sparse after a while, even with the second harp line added in. Though the entry of the instruments at 2:04 is brilliant, I wish the harp would drop an octave or something, it gets a little too piercing at the higher parts and I'm not convinced it's just the sound.
2:59 is sublime; I wish there was more of a buildup than a timpani roll, though, because the string passage is very emotionally written. But the really high strings could probably use being played an octave lower as well, just to give it even more of a lush thickness.
How everything drops out save the one instrument at 3:54ish is very nice, though having a little more reverb on the instruments being removed would have been nice just to make it seem less abrupt.
After that attempt at critique--I think you've got some very good ideas here; I love your melody and harmony work and your general skills at arranging the instruments. The flute solo does also work very well, if I haven't mentioned that already. I could see this working very well in a ominous setting in an RPG. Two off of ten, simply to try and encourage you to fix that harp sound, which is the one thing that threw me off majorly in this piece. Very nice work, overall.
Thank you SOOOOO much for your critique.
I do understand how the harp really affects the overall feeling, so i'm going to try to change it for another instrument, seeing as the harp has been present in most in-depth critiques such as this i believe the part could do better with something like a concert piano instead of harp.
I'm going to try and fix some of the things that went wrong, and then i'll change files.
EDIT: I updated it, this time with piano. Enjoy. :D