hm
well not bad, i think you spent to much time on making them move how they did, it kinda gets boring cause of that, and you should put background music next time, but it was good.
Reviews for "Erica's Farm 1"
Great Transitions
I love the transitions and the animation too. I'm not sure what the hell was going on in it, but the animation was really cool.
Hrmm...
I dunno. It's different, I'll give you that. It leaves me a bit confused, though. Maybe if it weren't so fast? It also might be better if the expressions appeared on the characters faces instead of in speech bubbles. =] A plot would also be nice, too.
beautiful, beautiful nonsense ^__^
This flash made absolutely no sense but it's sheer brillance for what it is. I'm guessing by the "1" in the title this is the first in a series so some of the lack of plot is because this is an introductory episode. I guess that there will be more of a plot in the next episode but don't make it too plotty, make it crazy and random, like ARFENHOUSE! rawr arfenhouse!
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If the way you did the character designs wasnt bad enough you went and did the animations like that!, it was so very creepy is what i was getting at, which is absolutely great on your behalf. I loved the way you used the noises as well when you animated it, i espically liked it when the characters turned away from the camera and that bone crunching sound could be heard. Overall this was a very interesting way to display a flash presentation, crazy style.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)