Not Bad for a first try
If this is your first try, it isn't that bad at all, just try to actually create a story instead of just some random screaming people getting killed... But apart from that, if you just keep practising you might actually be good..., i'll look out for new submissions
Why????????
Too much screaming!!!!!! Seriously it was loud. Plus all the screaming I was doing while watching it.
this is pretty lame
but i suppose it is better than stick men flashes. keep improving and getting better at flash and please don't go back to making stick men flashes.
Well, to be blunt... this sucked.
However in it's suckiness, I did laugh so you get a point for humor. For making me laugh at the suck factor.