00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

ozziel94 just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Reviews for "Super Mario Screw Ups"

You have room for improvement... LOTS of room.

First off, the movement of your sprites has to be a lot smoother. You want to try to get the movement as close to the original mario as possible, since your going to be imitating it.

Secondly, you could probably tone down on the swearing a bit. I mean, I don't mind the swearing, but it detracts from the humor of the language when used in excess. Same with sexual references.

Thirdly, the violence is a little over done. When a character is killed in a comical manner, its funny. When a character is killed in a comical manner 5 times within the minute, not as funny. Maybe working on the script a bit more will help.

Finally, the sounds... my god the sounds. Some were just plain off, others plain wrong, and the addition of the PB&J time banana was a little unnecessary. It's almost as if you needed the cameo to keep your viewers interest, like some sort of floundering sitcom.

Nice try, but you need to improve vastly before trying again.

PsychoticALT responds:

Ok, so 20 fps isn't fast enough, tone down the swearing, the violence, and improve sounds. Thanks for the review.

...

it was alright.
graphics is a 5 because it was a sprite film. sure there were a few flash drawings, but it was mostly sprites.
style is a 0 because one of my favorite animators made the mario mishaps. this is almost exactly like them, even the intermission between each clip is almost the same, minuse the music...
sound is a 3, there wasent much, and the homer sound was predictable...
violence was a 4..how voilent do sprites get?
no interactivity besides play...
human was 5 cause it was good, but dident make me fall out of my chair.

good work though, gl with your next film

?

i didn't laugh once. not even a chuckle... or anything.

OwtStindang

This is one of the funniest mario parodies ive seen and i liked the way you put the PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME in it

brilliant

brilliant absolute brilliant i thought this was hilarious thumbs good work and make more...