You've got my attention, thats for shure!
I am a Jumpstyle/Hardstyle person, so naturally I have a desire to kill and torture those who make House/Ambient music (with comments when they deserve it!) but you got my attention right from the start, wich is very surprising to me. I would post that other one just to see what happens! This one is catchy! I'm gong to just throw this thaught out, but make a Trance/Jumpstyle version of your song! Good Job (Surprisingly!)