Excelent work
That was a great flash, by far and away one of the best I have seen come through the portal in a long time, well done you should be very pleased with yourself, I would say one thing though, and that is it wouldnt hurt to have some sound, even if that was only ambient music in the background, as it would really give the piece atmosphere, but nevertheless you did the hardest part, and lobbing on some mp3 isn't the hardest thing to do in the world, congratulations again, and I hope to see some more of your flash come through soon.