Atta boy.
Nice work man. Im loving the positve message you're trying to spread. You're ability to make a song that flows nicely from start to finish is amazing; I like the last bit of the track where you threw in that sound clip. The "God has a plan" sample, needs some refining ( it kind of breaks the motion of your track). You're delivery with this sort of sadness works fairly well.
Dude, I am proud of you. You are making worthy music with heart. Keep at it!