^_^ Its not a matter of if the art is bad... I like anime art, despite it looking like it came from paint.... but it definitely set the mood quite elegantly. I would love to see more pieces like this, as a lesbian myself, the storyline was very touching. Especially Jacky's story nearly made me cry. I only saw 3 endings, and a lot of bad choice endings. =3 Maybe introduce yet another girl and more endings. A lot of people scream better art... I want to see a more fluid storyline as near the end of Jacky's scene, we're hit with a WALL of text. I was looking forward to MOAH pictures. ^_^
Reviews for "TehKar - Seduction ep. 2"
Love the Idea
I like the writing, and the idea of this interactive story. The drawings, however, are terrible. If you were to improve the graphics and drawings, it would be perfect!
I would say...
I would tell you to increase the quality of your drawings but considering my drawings are worse than this I don't want to feel like a hypocrite...
story seemed kinda cheesy
it was... cute i guess but you should really bump up your art skills man... i would really like to see a few more of these if you upgrade them more
Once Again
I had just finished "reading" part 1. Somehow I feel the need to take the images and enhance them. Draw them out carefully and with detail. this would make reading and viewing a lot more "interesting".