GET BONED PPL
Here is the deal bro. The slow builds in this song are so smooth and beautiful that they really bring out the brilliance in this song. I however feel that the over the top synth stuff (1:05-1:50) is too squeaky. I honestly think you should go for a pulsating or tremolo effect on clean strings. Lay that through multiple octaves and throw some teardrop style piano in the background. Let the rising and falling of the strings bring out the emotion in the song. You dont need an overpowering synth. You do a great job with most of your stuff and I know this is something different for you, but you have my advice and its never too late to go back and make something like this better.