my thoughts
well im going to start with the end.
my only though to the final ending is "OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM!"
>.> its an alright concept, but there need to be more them "one" path to the destination. thats the whole fun part about those kinda books, there should also be multiple destinations. decent enough as it is, work on the concept a bit longer, come up with other happenings like maybe Jessy comes home and the end of one of the other options and you can get it on with her >.> im just sayin
"OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM!"