Much better.
You have improved a lot since part 1, and I really really can't wait to see part 3. Did Jai have his accident or something? Or did he get kidnapped by that guy?
By the way: Is everything (including the accident, obviously) based off truth?
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I support you 100% don't let anyone tell you that this flash "sucks" or anything to that meaning. It's great and I hope this helps you cope with the loss.
My heart goes out to you ,
Good flash with a great heart
Sorry that your brother died, I really liked this flash, it's realism and the "story" of your brothers life. Perhaps you should listen "Watching Over Me" once, it's a beautiful song by a really great band called "Iced Earth" and the lyrics of the song will probably mean VERY much to you :)
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it was really good and well done, great job
Oh...
This one was happier. Gosh... I'll go and watch the other one...