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Reviews for "The Ice-Cream Rap"

Love it!

Lol i love it, not everyday you come acrossed someone with the talent to rap like this. Nice lyrics I found them funny and entertaining! It's as if I wanna here more of the story lol. Nice!

~CaKeS

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Heh AWESOME. I am surprised not very many people like the rap. :'(

Nice

I liked this-it's pretty funny, but you have many typos in your lyrics in the Author's Comments, and the voice is not loud enough most of the time. If the voice was louder, I would get it a bit better.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Yeah I cant change the authors comments im sorry. Just turn up your volume or wear headphone. I will try to equalize it better next time with my next thing though. :)

Woooo!

Awesome! Dis rocks major ice-cream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11one

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Rocks major ice-cream? I haven't heard anyone use that phrase since the attack in 1973.

cool

Dude your b-boxing in the middle was hilarious

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

I tried to be hilarious yet serious at the same time, which somehow worked lol.

I like it

Not bad, really. I like your lyrics, and your rapping is pretty good, too.
You need to normalize the volume of your microphone though, sometimes you get way too loud, sometimes your too low-voiced.
And maybe get a better microphone to get rid of those "p" and "b" noises.
I like it anyways :)

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

I just need to filter out the ps and bs by adding a tiny towel around my mic or a piece of tin material over my mic.

Thanks for the review! It was helpful. :)