niiicee
The song is really awesome. And to hear a new song in a while makes everybody feel better, so.. nice job there
ps: u rock!
Reviews for "{Dj-L} Inspiration"
Meonly70 responds:
Thanks, glad you liked it man!
Hey
Alright here's my review. Sorry I missed out before but yeah anyway.
Love the melody, it's damn nice and catchy. The leads also pretty nice too :D
There's a fair bit I can go through with this song. First of all I love the piano into, it's good :D But I think the kick should come in later at 0:13 and not the same kick as the melody go for a breakbeat sequence, not the 4/4 so you get more of an introduction. If you want, I'll show you what I mean on msn.
Have the breakbeat up to 0:28 where you that nice scratch effect.
Up to where the melody starts to jump in i think you should do some fading on those long notes so it sounds like it doesn't get cut off as it breaks.
Fade those long notes in each time and I reckon it would sound awesome. Again I'll show you what I mean on msn.
Love the melody. Just keep the piano goin through 1:46-1:59, (A tip don't cut sounds out sharply. Give everything some type of introduction and outro.. fade out/fade in, it keeps the song flowing properly and evenly.)
At 1:59 I think you should have a melody fade-out for 8 bars, say the first 4 bars and then introduce the piano in the second 4 bars. Then bring in the piano break tune of 2:12. And maybe fade in that melody after and add the same type of baseline at the main melody. (That saw)
Maybe increase the volume of the hi hats etc and tone down the claps a bit.
Hope this really helps. Will talk to you later.
Keep it up!
5'd
-Cheers Brando
PS: Pretty long review. :D
Meonly70 responds:
The beginning kick isn't the same as the one during the melody, similar, but softer. I'll love to see what you mean for the breakbeat sequence.
Yeah, your right, it would be a great idea to fade on the long notes, why hadn't I thought of that earlier....
I didn't want to over-repeat the piano so I cut it out through 1:46-1:59, but I guess it would be better if it stayed.
The Melody fade out would make it sound a little cliche. I don't like fading things in and out too much on one song, but some fit better than others, thanks for the tip.
The Hihats and claps may just need to be balanced, I think their in the wrong FX Channel O.o
I got a few things to try with this .flp now. Thanks, talk to you later man :)
Sick with it n***a
keep it up
Very Good
This song is awesome.. keep making great songs.. I cant even try and figure out how to even start making songs
Meonly70 responds:
Make a melody, then build around it, its what mostly everyone does, but people have their ways.
If you need any help, let me know, I'll be glad to help.
Amazing!
An awesome techno song! I agree with the guy below me, it's good when people say what pushed them. I like the piano, and the song's constantly changing, when some people do this, it just makes you feel sick, and you can't concentrate on the song, but it really works when you do it. Also, I'd be delighted if you could check out my new song, Orangepot (named after me). http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/244683. It's not as good as this one, but I'd still like you do look at it. No one's reviewed it yet, but it's got a pretty good score.